In general, I like Doctorow’s subtle and ironic writing style and narration. While many readers in our class are not really in favor of his different ways of both the manipulation of his characters and the awkward tone, I find it rather amusing. For example, Doctorow’s portrayal of Ford is a demonstration of the manner in which Doctorow sees the inventor in his eyes: “He allotted sixty seconds on his pocket watch for a display of sentiment (Doctorow 136).” While it is true that this may be Doctorow just justifying on Ford’s attitude or nature, I feed that this is Doctorow laughing at Ford, describing his frenkle sense of humanity. Although the narration is vague at times, it does bring for a variety of viewpoints, which I find very intriguing.
Amazingly enough however, I am not content (I don’t know how to phrase this- I don’t really like it?) with the way in which Doctorow talks about his fictional characters when trying to “prove” they are real. On page 183, when Doctorow is talking about Coalhouse Walker Jr.’s background, I was rather annoyed when he said “ Here, given subsequent events, it is important to mention what little is known about Coalhouse walker Jr. Apparently he was a native of St. Louis, Missouri....There were never located any of his school records in St. louis and it still is not known how he acquired his vocabulary and his manner of speaking. Perhaps by an act of will.” Maybe this botheration came to me because Doctorow is no longer fictionalizing historical characters but trying to create history using fictional characters. The “apparently” here is the center of the paragraph: with every character in the book, Doctorow takes their place by saying things like “he allotted...for a display of sentiment,” instead of apparently. The same is true with J.P. Morgan. I don’t know what Doctorow is trying to do by staying apart from this character and giving us a negative connotation of him.
I understand that this weirdness is probably due to intensification in the historical fiction genre which is now showing its true colors, trying to express a fictional character seem real by providing vague details of his past and twisting with our brains. I guess we’ll just have to keep reading to find out more!